scifijjoan:
Wow - that scene was in the original script? That would've been fun. What a neat way to incorporate it.
Yeah, I wonder if it pushed the boundaries of 'the family hour' at the time, and maybe that's why they cut it. 'Course, I made it just a tiny bit less innocent than it was in the original.
Tank:
No matter what she does, poor past Lois is doomed to have to cut her long locks. [Wink]
So true!!
DW:
loved the variation on the honeymoon suite part!
Thanks!
KathyB:
he most interesting part of this chapter for me is Clark being frustrated with Lois' "moony-eyed cheerleader" routine now that he's lived so long without it. I definitely buy this and feel for him; the overarching theme of the first 2 seasons was the fact that she needed to get over her hero-worship to make the real relationship possible, so I sympathize with Clark for having to deal with it again.
I struggled with how I would portray this, so I'm glad it's working for you. I was worried about making Clark too standoffish with the old Lois, but you realize by shuffling them, just how much they both matured over the course of season 3 & 4.
Thanks for the feedback, all! Part 4 is up!
