What a wonderful emotional chapter.

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But she couldn't very well invite him to share the bed with her now, could she? She knew that was asking for trouble.
Watch out Lois!

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What if he was stuck with the old Lois? That would have been perfect three years ago, but now, after all they had been through together, they couldn't recreate that. His Lois was a different Lois, as different as if they were different people.
What a neat way to show that circumstances have changed both of them. And if that series of events were to change- what would be the impact? (Gotta love time travel)

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"Clark, *you* gave me this ring. Or rather, you will give it to me," she said softly, all the emotion of what that meant to her evident on her face.
Great emotions in this scene. At first I was concerned about disrupting the time line but you've provided a good explanation (HG Wells monitoring) to account for that.

Looking forward to more...

Joan