MozartMaid Thanks. 'Riveted' is great!
Joy Both Sam and Clark are in prison - although in different ways. Some things Lois learns from one, she can use with the other.
Emily Just how long is his beard now anyway?
Nipple length?
I guess trimming it was not a priority for Trask.
More than that, it dehumanised him by taking away his choice.
Methinks the prisoner will be getting something new as well!
Nice prediction!
SJH Veronica is helping Lois deal with her dad's situation. Experienced, caring nurses like her are an absolute treasure.
Jen and Laura I'm posting a couple of parts quickly, then we'll have to slow down a bit.
Evelyn So glad it doesn't disappoint!
DW Re Clark healing ... he's going to need someone to love him unconditionally.
Good pick up on the clothes!
Kathy I think it would have been so hard for Clark to maintain any hope that things could improve.
Michael Yeah, is the mirror coated in lead, too?
Yep. Can you imagine Trask allowing the alien to spy on him?
Vicki This is downright uncanny. If I didn't know you were already working on Part 13, I'd swear you wrote this part directly after reading my last feedback post. It manages to address every one of my questions!
I always feel relieved when somebody FDKs a question that I have already answered in written-but-unposted parts!
Re the comment on Lois's insecurities. I had to give her some pain, too, or else I risked the relationship being too unbalanced. She has to *need* Clark, too.
HUGE thanks to everyone for your FDK. I'm so
about the reaction to this fic.
Corrina.
