That was a powerful story. It was neat to see the evolution of Lois' feelings with the snipets over time.
“It’s just that… you seem to have a lot in common.”
I was a little surprised by that statement about Mayson and Lois. To me, Mayson seemed so insecure compared to Lois. But you handled this well and even got me thinking. Mayson is insecure when it comes to Clark but she is a competant professional.
What if, by marrying Clark, I lose myself? What if Clark secretly wants that?
This fear seems very realistic. I like the way you dealt with it.
Beautiful story!
Joan
