Have I mentioned before that you are a very talented writer? Because you are - it felt like I was inside the compound and prison with Lois ... my heart also beat faster when she was in there, because even though we know the prisoner is actually a good person, there still remains some element of surprise
I loved that Lois got him the clothes and can also understand why she hasn't given it to him yet ... there is an imaginable boundary that she doesn't want to cross, for very good reasons (like Shadbolt and Longford not running to Scardino), but she will inevitably cross them anyway.
I, too, loved their communication and exchange of notes and the aeroplane idea was really inspired
And I am looking forward to their face-to-face meeting - maybe some of the questions we readers have regarding the prisoners lack of speech will be answered?
More please (and I hope soon too - if not, the time should pass quickly until the next part!)
and ...
I can't wait to read the next part! Is there anyway we can bribe you and make you post sooner?
I'll chip in too? But what to bribe you with?
Clues will be appreciated!
