This was perfect. I loved every sentence.
I'm a bit late with feedback, and everyone else has pretty much said it all. All I can do is second everything that was said above.
Especially all the comments of readers anxious for the next installment! haha. Three days down, and, if I understood correctly, only one to go!
Today wasn't too bad, as I spent some time this morning with my daughter and grandkids putting up and decorating our Christmas tree, and the rest of the day making and freezing 8 dozen
Pasteles (the Puerto Rican kind, if you're reading the article I linked to)
But tomorrow, I have nothing to do but sit around all day clicking the "Refresh" button. It's going to be a long day.
I'm especially interested in reading the conversation you preview up above. I got such a lump in my throat when I read that last line.

How *do* you manage to convey so much with just simple, understated prose?
