KathyB
this almost has become two different stories put together, the first half and the second half.
Yes, I've realized this as well. It wasn't my first intention, but it is definitely 2 distinct parts. I think I will label it that way in the final version.
don't Lois's parents get divorced the Christmas when she was 12, not 16?
I have to admit, I didn't research that. I just remembered it was in her teens... She is meant to be 16 here...minor adjustment
