Bellarase I was hoping for him to shave this chapter
He *will* shave in 17 - and Lois *will* see him.
Laura Re the hug - it's a long, slow dance
Iolanthe Moyne ... uhmm!
Evelyn I couldn't have the Kents at the farm - firstly, I'm not sure it would be terribly realistic, and secondly, it wipes out some of my plot!
Definitely hoping that Scardino and Menzies don't come while she's gone.
You got your wish
Elizabeth Sigh. I thought I'd got all the Australian touches out of my system in AR, but this one crept in!
Joy Small town rivalry is a powerful thing!
Kathy An interesting mix of FDK
- you got some things exactly right and some things sort of right!
MozartMaid But I hope that Wayne Irig might be able to provide some clues??
Lois had to be really careful about asking direct questions. If she hadn't gone to Scardino with the names, the need for care might have been less. But, having given Scardino the names of Clark's parents, there was a chance *Scardino* would go to Smallville asking questions (for either good reasons or bad) and she didn't want someone saying ... 'There was a young woman here last week asking exactly these questions.'
You are stringing us along though waiting for Clark's haircut
I was eager for it, too - in fact it was one of the first scenes that was 'written' in my head - but there was other stuff that needed to be done first.
Vicki Does this mean you have actually finished writing Bridge?
I have now
I started the third story today.
And, of course, find out where the Road will take us!
Uhmm - as story 3 is becoming clearer in my mind, I'm wondering if 'Road' is the best title.
What have you done to the Kents!?!
Good question! I know how it ends for the Kents - I'm not 100% sure how to get there
DW I think that Lois will head back to Smallville, well, the farm and hope that she won't have an encounter with Moyne there and I also hope that Menzies and Scardino won't enter the cell
Howzat? You got everything you asked for
Maybe Lois, who would go into Clark's room, can take somethings from his room to him in the cell?
You get the cookies this time!
Michael Now, why does that sound like a bad omen?
Because you have a suspicious mind, Michael!
Plus, two more days and ten parts.
What can I say? A lot happens!
Emily It is always *very* encouraging to hear that the story is holding up.
I'm glad you liked the foot massage - that means you won't forget it.
Here's to hoping that Lois is an accurate predictor of the future.
Lynn I'm particularly glad you're enjoying it, because I keep sending you new parts to iron out!
BIG thanks to everyone for your continuing interest in this journey. You rock!
Corrina.
