Wendy,
I really like your Clark here. Not clueless and not mowed over by Lois.
Also, enjoy how Lois is forever trying to pigeon-hole him, get him to fit into her ideas of what men are, and how she struggles to do this.
Can't wait to see where you take us,
CC
Oh, and really like the little changes you made to Jonathan Kent in part 1. Very nice.
