I was hoping to beat your fdk-fdk, but alas I failed. Late feedback is better than no feedback right?
I love watching Agent!Lois in action, like the way she approached the nurse after talking to O'Brien, and gleamed what seems to be vital pieces of the story.
Reuben grinned suddenly. "It's a good story, huh?"
Maybe he says this b/c he really wanted Jonathan to have died? *hopes*
"Bye, Evan."
A half smile almost escaped before Shadbolt turned and hurried through the door.
Hee! Looks like he owes Lois one. I could not figure out how Lois was going to get the machine back to Shadbolt - again Lois comes up with a great plan.
Let everything that was Lois answer the cry of his heart.
And, for the first time in his life, Clark didn't feel alone.
Great scene. My heart aches for Clark. I'm so glad he allows Lois to comfort him.
