MozartMaid It's understandable, though... and even though leading up to one (and therefore a declaration on where both of their feelings lay) is slow, it's realistic and will be satisfying when we get there.
I hope it will be satisfying. I did say a couple of FDKs ago that I was going to have some fun with the kiss. This is Ep 1. Ep 2 is coming.
DW Clark really had to scrounge up his courage to ask that question ... however, the real "challenge" will be what Lois answers and what she is prepared to reveal?
This is from my FDK-FDK for Bridge 11 ...
I was writing last night and suddenly, my muse had had enough of all the skirting around how they feel, and Clark asked a direct question, and Lois answered, and the next thing I knew the scene was written, and they had a lot of things sorted out
It isn't quite what I had planned, but
That is more courage and hope than I would have thought he had.
Me, too.
Clark asked, Lois answered, I'm screaming 'Guys, guys, we're *not* up to this yet," - but they ignored me and kept talking.
Then I read it the next morning and thought ... uhmm, that works.
Nanou Hi. Thanks so much for taking the plunge and leaving FDK. Yeah, after all of this waiting, I guess the first time has to be pretty special. I'll try.
Evelyn The emotions of both are somewhat scattered - I'm so glad it's making sense.
Vicki This fic has a few themes. For me, one of the main ones is that even when the circumstances are ugly and horrible, love can still be beautiful.
Laura Glad you liked it, Laura.
Bellarase Ditto what I said to Vicki.
Michael And now they both thought it. Who's going to spill the beans first, so to speak?
Who's the most impulsive?
Kathy I see a lot of parallels between Sam and Clark in this story
Yeah - I borrowed a lot. Lois took the idea of the hair wash from her dad to Clark, and took the idea of the jigsaw puzzle from Clark to her dad.
Joy It *was* shorter than usual. I didn't really plan it that way - it just happened.
Emily which you alluded several fdk threads ago might occur soon?
Good memory!
Many thanks everyone. I'm going to look over Trail 6, then the next job is to post 22. I doubt I'll get it done tonight - if not, first thing tomorrow morning.
Corrina.
