Another fantastic episode adaptation. Your stories add such richness to the original scripts!
One minor error you may wish to correct before you archive the story... You have Clark walking around Metropolis until dawn and then, a few paragraphs later and seemingly only an hour or so later, Martha is making dinner.
You have done so well with the two episode adaptations you've written already, I can't wait to read your first completely novel L&C story. (Yes, that *is* a hint!
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Joy,
Lynn
