Another beautifully written part! Clark's isolation is understandable and so well expressed. It's heartbreaking to see Lois so eager to want to be closer to him, with Clark withdrawing ever more into his shell. I'm interested to see how you bring him back to life, so to speak. I wonder if he'll ever be whole... but I know the journey you'll take us on will be interesting and satisfying!

Wondering where that cliffy will lead! Looking forward to more! hyper


Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink