Love it! The self-deprecating humor and voice of Lois' internal monologue is loads of fun -- loving the subtext you're including on the familiar dialogue... PLEASE don't wait so long to post the next part! Lois and Clark in a hotel... and she knows the secret and he doesn't know she knows??!! 'Bout to fall over with excitement! thud


Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink