Ohhh, very nice. I love this scene from Witness -- even after all these years, I still catch my breath at the way he holds and rocks her, and how she clings to him -- and you did it wonderful justice. Usually when fanfic authors use in-canon scenes like this, I'm left feeling like they didn't really add much to it, but this was different. I really felt like I was reading something original, with the scene just there for background. Nicely done!
I'm definitely looking forward to the next three parts.
Kathy
