Wow! Lovely story, Lynn.
I usually don't give feedback straight after reading. I like to think through a story before responding - so this is 'first impressions'.
Would you believe - I didn't see the kiss coming - even though I asked for it.
And the Hawks won!! That's always good. (On Saturday, I'm going to my first game for the year
It's only a practice game and all I really want is to get out of it with no injuries, but I'm still
)
This was really lovely. You took my prompts and weaved them into a sweet story. And I really appreciate the insight into Thanksgiving. We don't celebrate it at all.
Thank you!! You did a great (and fast) job!
Corrina.
