I love your story! Great job!
The last word of the following sentence, I think is a typo:
“We believe that when the crystal bullets shattered, they created a spray of microscopic partials.
I think you probably mean "particles" instead of partials, at least it makes more sense to me, as the word "partials" always make me think of false teeth!!
Looking forward to how you wrap this up in the next few!!!
