Ooh! This is fun! I like your Lois' voice -- lots of little deadpan comments that are really funny. I didn't expect the turn in drama at the end of the part with Henderson's daughter on the line! Obviously Clark is going to have to get out of there somehow -- anyway, looking forward to the next part!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.