Loving this so far, Wendy!
I like Lois ogling Clark in his tight shirt and well-fitting suit.

And it is nice to see Clark go a bit GQ.
Somehow I think that the new Clark is going to bring Lois a whole new level of appreciation... and maybe some jealousy. He's in love with somebody else, after all!
Hmm, was that salesman blond? *goes back to the story to check*