Intriguing part... I loved the rescue at the beginning smile Didn't we ALL wish that had happened in canon (maybe not alt-Clark rescuing a past Lois... but the basic sentiment was there!)

I like your use of Star. I rarely see her in fanfic-- in fact, I can't think of one with her in it. She can be a good comic relief. smile

Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink