Finally getting a chance to catch up on some reading!
I love the pace of your dialogue--I can easily hear the character's voices!
Great poetic justice that Lois is naturally an excellent cook in the alt-verse.
Nice touch!
I actually saw what I could only describe as fear in Kal’s eyes when I suggested he come with me to talk to Sam. I wonder if it has to do with…
Hmm... wonder where this is going?
"Don’t do anything rash.”
She grinned at him with an innocent expression he didn’t believe. “Who? Me?”
Classic
Will try and catch up to the rest of the parts this weekend! Enjoying the story!
