I love this story--you really captured the influence that Clark has on those around him, not as Superman, but as Clark Kent.

Jimmy's part very nicely pulled out how much he did grow immediately following Clark's arrival.

Lois's was sweet--I hope she finds the courage soon to tell him how she feels! smile

Perry's was almost bittersweet, but definitely ended on a high note.

And Clark's was perfect in how it paralleled Lois's and touched on how hard it was for him to open up and yet how much he wanted her to know him.

Great start and welcome to the MBs--I'm glad to see you here!