I just LOVE your Martha! The inner battle was well-chosen for the ending! Cause that was the heart of the story after all--Lois loving Clark no matter what--trusting that he was not a monster, but a man. And Clark trusting her to love him, and trusting himself that he was capable of loving...well done!
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.