I'm catching up on the last couple of parts, so my comments refer to both parts 3 and 4.
I'm still loving every line of course. I've always admired your talent for introspection, as you know, but now you're adding more and more wit to your dialogue, and the result is getting more and more splendid.
And of course I'm delighted that he found a way to invite her to dinner.
Can't wait to see how that turns out!!
Another fantastic section, Wendy! More!
Kaethel