Great part, Missy!
I look forward to the next one.
You did a great job with Lois' introspection about her feelings for Clark and Superman.
I loved the way Lois is able to be there for Clark while he deals with the loss of his super powers.
I also loved the use of the song in the last paragraphs, the fact that Lois 'knows' it's Clark's favorite and the way she consoles him with it.
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