I fear RL is keeping me ultra-busy these days. No time to write the detailed feedback that I would prefer to leave. (Barely time to read the story. As it is, I am cutting out a *lot* of fanfic reading.
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Anyway, this part definitely deserved comment.
I love how you had Clark donate to the shelter all the stuff he had bought in order to keep his running-off excuses truthful. (Come to think of it, why would he even need to belong to a Cheese of the Month club? Wouldn't it be cheaper simply to fly to the various countries and by the cheeses right where they are made?)
Poor Henry O. I was going to comment about his name ('Henry O.' as opposed to 'O. Henry'), but then I saw that you drew it from the script of ASU. IIRC, he never actually said his name in the show, did he?
When Lois tried to divine Clark's secret near the start (Secret wife? Secret life of crime? etc.) ?
Thanks for the stress relief. Looking forward to part three. I know you plan to post it tomorrow; any chance it will be fairly early in the day?
Joy,
Lynn
