I liked the line about the moon also. In fact, throughout this story I have been impressed by your use of personification - another great example being the waves that lifted Clark up from the bottom of the river once they realized it was him. help

I'm looking forward to reading climatic Chapter 21! hyper

"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster