Pete's appearances are few and far between in this story. I am planning on using him a little more in another story.

That little scene was included into the story almost three months after the part was written. There was a decidedly lack of romance between Lois and Clark. This was the perfect place to inject some!

Yes! Perry was a better Father than Sam could ever hope to be. But in this story, Perry still gets to 'walk down the aisle' with someone...

Evelyn, so glad you picked up on those errors! I made the adjustments!

Thanks so much for the comments!


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.