She was not to give the impression that she’d been ready for ages and had been waiting patiently for Clark to come.
Forgot an
im there, didn't you, Lois?
These last two sections were lovely and seemed very natural and real. I was especially taken with Lois' nervous fiddling right before the date, tweaking everything to make sure it was absolutely just so. Reminds me of a first date I had, oh, about twelve years ago or so.
I agree with CC, though, that this is most un-Wendy-like. In fact, I'm a bit worried. You
can write an unangsty story, can't you, Wendy? This Clark
and this Lois (have I mentioned how much I like this Lois?
) are doing so beautifully that I hate to see their hopes crushed.
Hazel, who hopes
Lex will have a hope or two crushed in this fic
