Hey Pam -
I read this late last night and am just now getting time to post fdk. Great start. I haven't read the other two stories, but I certainly will check them out because this one hints at some exciting goings-on that I missed.
I did like that Clark decided not to go crazy with taking Lois far from home - keep it simple for a little while so as not to overwhelm her with the Superman abilities.
Can't wait to see how this progresses.
Lynn