Thanks so much for your feedback. The next part will be posted with some delay, I'm afraid. Thinking of the rest of this story, I guess this is the best place to stop. Otherwise, you're going to send
after me. And I'm not intentionally being mean.
I'm just going on a much needed vacation.
For those of you who speak German, there is a complete version of this story available here
Nur in meinen Träumen 
