Fun story. Thoroughly enjoyed this very different take on the lives of Lois and Clark.
I see you had a surprise ending to help explain why Clark was so over the top jealous, and Lois the more patient and steadfast one in the relationship.
A sequel would be nice. It will be interesting to see how the newly married couple deal with feelings and emotions that are more rational and their own.
Also there are some plot points that were intimated that we don't know the resolution to. Such as, what about Martha and Jonathan moving their restaurant back to Smallville, and how are Lois and Clark going to be able to graduate to full time reporters if the Planet is just a small potatoes weekly.
Looking forward to much more.
Tank (who wonders when this Lois will get the proper Lois haircut which has always been the physical marker for the change in the relationship between Lois and Clark)
