Joan: I'm glad you like Penny. I do too. The ambiguous Bruce makes him for a more interesting character. The reader knows he's essentially a good guy, but he's not really good at getting that point across to the Kents.

Michael: And Five! Yep, you're definitely going to finish FDK before I can catch up. I'm in the middle of editing Ch 6 at the moment and you only have 15-ish parts left. (I'm forcing myself to finish working on ML, but I'd rather move on to greener pastures / stories, which is a lot more fun -- for me! But if I don't work on ML now and send it on to LabRat, I'll never do it. So, I'm writing one day, editing the next. My next drama story - the first draft - is already 9 parts long; oh, and I also snuck in and wrote a scene for the sequel to ML, but so far it isn't even long enough for an entire part.)

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Oh, look at that!
Oh, dear, my Trask dreams are getting predictable.

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So long as he’s honest to himself the rest of the time…
He loves her, he wants her to be safe, he simply doesn't trust her at the moment.

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“Either you stay permanently, or you can just leave.”
Well, he started it by moving out! She didn't want him to feel pressured into staying. (Plus, maybe a bit of reverse psychology.)

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Still denying instead of ignoring the problem?
How exactly would Lois 'ignore' the problem?

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Poison Ivy’s into plants, not technology, although, Technical Fields could mean labs and stuff, too…
That would be the latter.

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Like she tried with her extended weekend with Alt-Clark?
Okay, so she's still a little angry with Clark.

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So, he tried to obviously turn her off of him? Like that never backfires.
He had a 50/50 chance.

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/imagines Batman starting interviews with “I may have hit the guy but I’m a good guy.”
clap "I only dented him a little bit!" Batman is still fairly new on the scene for my story.

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Well, Jimmy’s the same, so…
Yeah, what's up with those two...

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Is he worried that the Kryptonite damaged him?
Actually, no.

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Yeah, that must have really thrown him off the Clark is Superman bit.
I hear that Bruce is good at looking at the entire picture, not just little corners that people show him.

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Clever truth.
Yeah, sometimes hanging out with Clark rubs off.


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"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.