Amazing job on capturing the feeling of a young Lois Lane--the character we all know yet still a bit different and certainly not anywhere near as cynical, though she's certainly imaginative. I can see her having a bit of 'the boy who cried wolf' problem when she was small! smile

I love that even with this young Lois, Clark bantered with her exactly as he does to our Lois--and she had pretty much the same reaction, too. Annoyance to cover up interest, though our Lois didn't think of Clark having a story quite so soon!

I'm a bit worried as to what will happen when our Lois wakes up; hoping she has her memories. There's only so much torture poor Clark can take, though I guess her just being alive would be enough to tide him over.