Wow, amazing story! I was looking forward to reading this one, and it did not disappoint in the least! Amazing imagery, evoking cold while I read it and making me as lonely as Lois in her apartment and then as happy as she was to be with Clark. I love how well they two get along, and you captured that perfectly here.
I love the soft, slow way you drew out her burgeoning feelings, and it was amazing the way you described Clark's reaction to hearing Lois say she would choose him over Superman. That was all he needed to know!
Amazing job! Thanks for sharing!
