Wow! I think that about sums it up.

Very powerful. And the image of Clark giving his shirt to the girl was just...beyond words.

I think I'd like to see this extended a bit. I'd love a peek inside of Clark's head on just how haunting this has been. Knowing Clark, he probably blames himself for not hearing the girl calling for help, because that's just the type of guy that he is.

Great story, and I, for one, don't mind a bleaker story.


Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon