Hey, Mouserocks, thanks for the additional, detailed feedback--you know how to make someone's day a whole lot better!
I'm glad the writing style worked for you--I went back and forth on first person or not, but I'm glad I stuck with it.
Luthor's death wasn't really something I wanted to get into, but in writing it, I just couldn't imagine Jimmy shrugging something like that off so easily. Still, I avoided getting too much into it due to general laziness and the fact that my short story was rapidly growing longer and longer...
The camera theme was my first idea for the fic, but since I really know very little about photography, I was a bit dubious about starting it (I first thought of this story last September)--so I'm glad you liked it!
Again, thanks for leaving the feedback--and I hope you enjoy the Chuck stories as much as I enjoyed writing them!
