I've moved my post to the "Another Lois 25/25" fdk thread, because when I wrote it I didn't realize this was a stand-alone, and people reading it might not have already read "Another Lois," and might not want to read spoilers to that story. So... off it goes!
As far as straight-forward feedback for this story: I liked it. A nice take on the butterfly effect.
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
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