Great start. You got my interest right from the intro.
"Sorry to intrude on sacred ground," he teased.
Lol. That was a cute line.
Would they ever be one of the happy couples - or, better yet, happy families - sitting in the park one day?
Awwww....
And yet, it did not fall straight down into the small lake where the fireworks were being shot from an unmanned boat. Instead, it arced over the crowd, heading for the thick of the gathered families.
Oh, right, this makes more sense. The need for a Superman rescue. I had assumed kryptonite in Lex's stick, but for some reason had envisioned the firework exploding as part of the display, then raining K down on the ground. Which, when you think about it, makes no sense, as what would make Lex think Superman would be in the picnic area watching fireworks?
Then he dropped like a stone, his powers utterly abandoning him.
Quite a cliff-hanger here! Please post more soon!
PS - I think the setting sun's rays would have been horizontal, not vertical. No?
