Aww, got to love a happy ending! The date was just beautiful from beginning to end -- and I love the little changes you threw in there to remind us of the different setting, like her wearing violent since they hadn't had such a flustered time discussing their first date.
The ending, on the terrace, was just perfect; I loved every minute of it. And how nice that hearing Lois say she could love Superman as an ordinary man didn't carry with it all that painful baggage (I have to admit, when I read it, I tensed up a bit)! Love how she knows exactly the right thing to say to reassure him.
Great story -- sorry it took me so long to get to it!
