Originally posted by John Lambert:
I think you want to say "was basically a deadbeat".
Yes, that makes more sense. (Hey, look. I'm still alive after telling Clark he was a lunkhead for dumping Lois as Superman. Guess Luthor was wrong, after all.
Sadly, Clark isn't talking to me. I guess the next scene I work on will have to be Lois's POV.
LOIS: Don't worry. I think he's a lunkhead, too.)
After re-reading this part I have decided that the bond formed between Lois and Clark her is one of my favorite parts.
Glad you liked it.
I think that should be "at a table".
Those darn articles. They keep slipping away from me! Thanks. Fixed.
