Wow! What a great start. grumble My spell checker never catches those either).

I look forward to see where you will take this story and how sinester you allow your Luthor to become. Hugs for Martha and Jonathan as I'm now worried about their safety (not so much for Lana, but perhaps Rachel).

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.