Sara,
I have been an extremely "bad" girl here, I have been faithfully reading this story, but have not taken the time to let you know how absolutely wonderful it is!!!!!!!!!!!!! blush

This is terrific, I can't believe the stubborn Lois and lunkhead Clark have wasted 3 months!! (actually I can! <g>) My heart is just breaking for them. frown This is such an amazing sad tale you have woven, just hurry up and fix them!! wink

You write magnificent description and introspection!!!! I can picture Lois in her apartment "fussing" and can feel the huge range of her emotions, the pain, rejection, love, anger, attraction,and denial, all perfectly. smile1 )

"Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'