mrsMxyzptlk: I'm glad you are enjoying this story.
Thank you for reading.
One of the things I like about this story is that the narrator calls Clark/Superman "Superman" when he's Superman. A lot of LnC fanfic I've read has the narrator refer to him as "Clark" no matter what he's wearing, even when all the other characters in the scene think he's only Superman. It gets really confusing having Lois and Inspector Henderson and whoever talking to "Clark" and then finding out halfway through the scene that he's in a cape, and they're talking to Superman.
Yes, I find that a bit confusing too. The way it has been explained to me (by other writers) is that if it's Clark's POV, why would he be thinking of himself as "Superman"? This makes sense to a point, but I counter that argument by saying that if he's thinking about himself as being "Clark" while he's in the Super Suit isn't he more likely to act like Clark? He needs to think of himself as Superman while in uniform to keep the two personas separate, and why canon Clark has a tendency to refer to his other persona in the third person. I do have an upcoming scene where Clark in the Super suit thinks of himself as "Clark" but there's a reason behind this, but due to spoilage laws I cannot go into any more detail.
All in all, this is an enjoyable story to read, not only because of the engaging plot, but also because the writing is clear. I always know who is speaking, I always know whether Clark or Superman is in the scene, and I'm not tripping over bad grammar.
Thank you. Always good to hear.
and a good one at that.
