I've just found this story, and I absolutely love it. Lois and Clark are definitely changed by their circumstances, but I love how you still keep them true to character. I am also impressed how you have paced the story. You have given them time to get to know one another without the intrusion of the world, but you have set believable obstacles in place (Lana's cheating and Lois' marriage) to slow the development of their relationship. You have also done a nice job of gradually explaining their circumstances to the reader without giving too much away. I look forward to seeing how Lois and Clark overcome such challenges, especially as Bangala society and perhaps the outside world intrude upon their safe haven.
