Lynn, I thought it was spot on. I could easily follow the action. I thought that Todd's confusion over Lois's emotional state was completely appropriate and his concern for her was touching. I also liked how matter-of-factly she handled it: "I'm okay, Todd. Go back to Jerome." Simple, no big deal. I completely got the connection to the ring and his question about why Jerome wanted it and then didn't seem to want it. I got the impression that other people's actions often seemed odd to Todd, so he was used to other people acting strangely. He seemed to take it in stride.
Well done, sweet and touching!
Happy
