This feedback will have to do for this week's episode. The end of the quarter is coming up, and I'm buried under a mound of papers to grade. Sigh!
VirginiaR: Thanks for recognizing my 100th post. I hadn't even noticed myself. I do hope you aren't too disappointed that I'm not ending the story here. I suppose that there is an ending of a sort in that the truth has been told and Lois and Clark are finally together. However, I think there is a great deal to explore in terms of how they handle their new relationship Also, I didn't spend all of that time building up the Intergang information in the first few chapters just to let it drop. As for Clark's clothes, he's not in the habit of wearing his suit when he's at home. Think of all the shorts and cutoff shirts he wore in the series. As for the revelation, I'm tired of angry Lois. She had a good reason to be angry in the series because Clark lied about his death. I circumvented that here, and I placed her in a situation where she had to come to terms with her feelings before Clark comes home. What interests me is how the relationship develops from here, so I do hope you will keep reading.
Andreia: I do think I would stop writing if people complained that I didn't end a story. There's definite WAFF here, but there will also be some challenges in store for them. Thanks for reading.
KenJ: Mayson is a loose end here, but there's a bigger investigation in the works. Thanks for reading.
John Lambert: A three post review--wow. A couple of things: Lois calls him Clark because she realizes exactly who he is. She may be a little bit confused and angry, but the anguished story of the rescue is pure Clark. Superman is far too stoic a character to ever let down his guard in that way. Also, I think I should hire you as my proofreader. Usually, I'm much better at that. I am glad to hear that you are happy that the story is not over. I was starting to get a complex after the first couple of reviews. I also love the fact that I have all my readers completely flummoxed as to where this story is going. I don't like being predictable. Thanks again for taking so much time to write such a detailed review. I appreciate it!
Morgana: Mayson might be a loose end in more ways than one, but the real loose end is where do Lois and Clark go from here? They love each other, but how will they handle their new relationship. I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying the story, and I appreciate the fact that you took time to reply.
