You need to update your TOC page to include this newest part. Hope you don't mind, but I've included a link from my A-Plot challenge page to your story, as it seems to fit the bit quite well.
VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
