Originally posted by LMA:
Ahhhh--awesome story and beautiful ending! Loved it!
Thank you
--the 'check in' part was great--that poor front desk clerk! Couldn't get anything right
....the 'undercover' confusion was fantastic!
The check in scene was originally my Beta, KenJ's suggestion and boy am I glad for all his suggestions in this fic. I love Lois' offended, snippy banter.
--ah, it all makes sense now....it was a lot more than a b-day present--actually a LOT more
Yeah, there's a lot of meaning in it for Lois.
Gotta love Clark--so in love, so wanting to be close to her, but not pushing anything....very heart-warming!
My heart melts at romantic, loving Clark and I thought it was appropriate for this fic. (But my heart pounds and swwons at Alpha male aggressive Clark ... when it's appropriate)
And then on to the good stuff!
GREAT story! Loved every bit of it--thanks for sharing...it was such fun to read!
Thanks.
