Wrong Place, Wrong Time, Wrong Clark TOC can be found Here

I'm sorry if this part seemed to bounce too much from scene to scene. I was trying to show what was happening at the same time with a bunch of characters. I promise that my scenes will return to their non-concise length by the next part. wink /Being concise is not a trait I can hold on to for long./

Comments appreciated.

Last edited by VirginiaR; 04/30/14 01:04 AM. Reason: Fixed broken Link
VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.